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*|. Scent from Foreign Lands (Contest Entry) .|*

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Hello !
Yaay a canine, it's been so long <3
It's a contest entry for :iconmoxiv:'s contest. [link]
I really liked the song, it had elements from electronic and instrumental music, but I focused more on the instrumental side of it c:
I hope she likes it ! :squee:

P.S. Please download for full-size image ! :la:
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I think the problem with the inked-like lineart is the stroke itself. It is to hard and didn’t go very  smooth. Also, the lineart didn’t blend in with the colour and character. To overcome this, you can try a darker colour close to the lineart so it blend with the character. And If you could put a delicate stroke line on character chest to make it look like it have fur would be better.


But overall is good. The character feel harmony and the petal are really nice. But the ribbon on the character feet look flat. It should have some kind of round shape since it on it feet. The shadow and highlight are awesome.


You can improve on texture of the character, rock and the tree. Also the background is nice but a little detail won’t hurt.


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